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The night breeze caressed her warm cheeks as if on a compliment. She sighed, feeling relaxed as minutes passed by. (Name) was at the beach. She had been invited by her friends for a swimming training camp – they belonged to the Iwatobi Swimming Club and this training camp was already a pattern for them. Nagisa, Rei, Haruka and Makoto were part of that team and she was one of the closest friends of them. Gou and Ama-sensei had come too, since they were also part of the team. Rin and a few other Samezuka High students had become part of the same training camp – she was glad that Rin and Haru were friends again. Rin was actually a good person and she considered him her friend.

She was glad they invited her for their training camp – it just proved that they liked her as much as she does, so when they invited her, she was really happy. Her parents didn’t want to let her come, but thanks to Nagisa, they end up allowing her. Because, she thought, how could someone say no when he acts all cute and does that face that you just can’t help but say yes? That was what happened with her parents. And now she was here. Enjoying her first trip with her best friends. Could this get any better? She even decided to join them on the training and swim with them. Of course, she didn’t want to be a nuisance, so she decided to swim at her own rhythm and let them do their training. Gou said she would go, too.

And now she couldn’t sleep because she was too excited. And the sound of the waves crushing on the sand was keeping her sleep away.

(Name) decided to stay outside the tent for some time to refresh a little. Since she was sharing a tent with Gou, she didn’t want to disturb her – contrary to (Name), she was sleeping pacifically. Playing with the sand without feeling any will to sleep, she decided to walk a little by the sea. As she rose, she heard the sound of a zip being pulled. She looked behind and saw that Makoto was getting out of his tent, looking a little surprised for seeing her up.

“(Name)…” He said and carefully closed the zip to not wake up Haru. “Can’t sleep too?”

She turned to him a little embarrassed. “Yes.” She answered and blushed a little. “You’re having troubles to sleep too?”

“Yeah, I guess so…” he answered and approached her.

So Makoto was also having troubles sleeping too, she thought. He was probably as excited as she was about this training camp. Under the moon light, she noticed his eyes looked rather tired. No wonder, she thought, because they had trained exhaustively all day and, not being able to sleep even when he was tired was too bad. If only she could take away his fatigue away…

“Were you going for a walk?”

“Yeah. Wanna come?”


They walked towards the ocean side by side. (Name) suddenly felt a chill run down her back. Maybe I should’ve bought a jacket, she thought. It was night, and even though it was summer, the nights were always a bit chilly. She glanced up at Makoto and noticed that even he wasn’t wearing a jacket above his shirt. Perhaps he didn’t feel the fresh night breeze, she thought. He was a man; perhaps the cold didn’t bother him. Contrary to her, who was sensible to temperatures slightly lower than normal… She gazed away, a little embarrassed at herself. She should be stronger. And even thought she tried to look like the cold didn’t affect her, her body started to tremble a little. (Name) hoped Makoto wouldn’t notice.

“So, ready for tomorrow’s training?” He asked, making her look at him.

“Of course!” (Name) answered, showing her best determined face. Then she giggled. “Actually, that’s why I can’t sleep.” She admitted and looked at the ocean in front of her.

Makoto gasped in surprise. “Really? Are you that happy for coming?” She noticed the surprise in his voice, which bought a smile to her lips. Perhaps he wasn’t expecting such a thing from her. But she felt the need to be honest, much more when it came to him.

“Yes.” She said, honestly. At the sound of the waves crushing, she continued: “But I’m not just happy I came here. I’m happy because I came with the best people I ever met.” (Name) brushed away a strand of hair from her eyes to behind her ear and gazed at Makoto. “I couldn’t be happier than be with you.”

And that was when it hit her as if a truck just had crushed into her. She said something embarrassing. And now she was blushing a million shades of red. (Name) covered her month in shock.

“Sorry, I said something embarrassing…” (Name) stepped away from him dying in embarrassment, leaving Makoto standing at least three meters distanced.

“Huh? What…” He muttered, confused. But then, even though she couldn’t see his face clearly, she noticed the big O his lips were forming. “Oh! N-No… Actually… No, it’s…” She looked at him, face still died in read, and saw him scratch his neck. “It’s okay.” He said and slowly walked to her. “You mean you’re happy you can be with us, right? Or… something like that…” as he came closer, she noticed the slight blush on his cheeks. Great, I made him blush! Seeing him like that only made her more embarrassed.

“I’m really sorry, Senpai…” she muttered, immediately regretting it. (Name) heard him sigh and she bite her tongue.

“You called me Senpai again, (Name)…” He said. She looked up at him feeling guilty but, what she saw wasn’t what she expected. He was wearing his usual kind smile.

“Sorry, it slipped…” (Name) said and smiled nervously. Makoto had asked her – more like ordered her – to not call him ‘senpai’ when they were so good and close friends. He said there was no need for such formalities between them; and he had asked her so sweetly, so gently… with that smile of his…

But his usual kind smile was soon gone and he was now glaring at her with brows furrowed.

“I’m going to punish you.” Even though his voice tone wasn’t serious at all, it was enough to make (Name) gasp in shock. Makoto didn’t even give her time to react properly and ask for mercy. “You better run.”


As she saw him walking behind her in big steps, (Name) started to run as fast as her legs allowed. Makoto was right on her tail, and of course he would soon catch her since his figure was much more athletic than hers, but even so, she run for her life.

(Name) run through the beach nonstop with Makoto chasing her. This is crazy, she thought. Her legs were already asking for a stop, but the boy behind her wouldn’t let her do so. Even though she was exhausted already, she couldn’t stop laughing. What exactly was his intention? What punishment was awaiting her? And then, when she was about to ask what he was planning, (Name) stepped on the sand and shrieked. Her reflexes were faster and she supported her weight on her hands.

“(Name), are you okay?” Makoto asked, stopping next to her. She rose up and cleaned the sand from her hands and knees.

“I’m fine.” (Name) said and gazed at him, not exactly sure if she should run again or simply wait for his reaction.

They were both panting. Looking behind, their tents were already too far to the point she could barely see them.

“Want to go back?” He asked; probably noticing she was looking back at their tents.

“Do you want to go already?” (Name) asked fixing her clothes. He didn’t answer right away and she suddenly remembered something. “By the way, why couldn’t you sleep? Is something wrong?” She thought that she should worry as much as he did with her.

“No, there’s nothing wrong. I guess I’m just excited as much as you are with this year’s training camp. After all, Rin came too, Haru is happy, and…” He trailed off, gazing at the ocean. There was something on his eyes that (Name) didn’t expect to see. Sadness. The light on his eyes wasn’t there for a fraction of second and that made her sad and worried.

“Makoto?” She approached him. Makoto gazed back at her in the eyes.

Seeing her looking worried, he gave her a reassuring smile. “It’s nothing, don’t worry.” He said and patted her head.

But she didn’t accept his answer. “If there’s something wrong, you can tell me, seriously. I know I’m not Haru-senpai, but you can trust me. I want to help you…” Her heart was squeezing thigh on her chest with the look on his face. (Name) just couldn’t handle seeing someone said; not her friends, and especially, not him. He had done so much for her, helped her so many, countless times that, whenever he looked rather down, she would always try to pull him up; bring his favorite Makoto Tachibana up. She didn’t want to replace Haru, she just cared too much for him.

Makoto smiled again and closed his eyes. He suddenly leaned down and laid his forehead on her own, making her blush. “Thank you.” He whispered and her heart skipped a beat.

He was so close and his forehead was so warm. (Name) soon forgot about the chill she felt before. She couldn’t feel it anymore when Makoto was keeping her from the cold. Seconds after, he withdrew his forehead and then held on her on a kind embrace. That was unexpected. She tried to relax, but she found herself unable to. Why was he embracing her? Without answers, only with the wind blowing against them, (Name) called for him, feeling rather alarmed. Her heart was beating like crazy.

“Let me hold you like this… Just for a little longer…” He said at her ear, making her gulp. She couldn’t calm down with the sudden approaching for two reasons: one, this was the first time they were having close contact like this and, despite the fact that they were friends, she was caught off of guard with such thing. He had never held her before, so why now? What was happening? Besides, she saw he was looking gloomy, but why? What had made you look like that? What was happening? The answer kept repeating on her head like an alarm. And the alarm kept ringing and ringing with no signal it would stop.

Just what was happening?

“Sorry.” He said; his voice muffled by her hair. “I guess I can’t let you go yet.”

Her eyes widened in shock. She could only ear her heartbeat on her ears. This wasn’t cool at all, but what should she do? (Name) was still in shock as her hands worked their way automatically to his back. She held him as gently as he was doing with her, even though her hands were shaking uncontrollably. What was happening? He was still sad. It could only be that. But why was he sad? (Name) had been so excited with the training camp that she didn’t pay attention to the little details that might have slipped her. Perhaps something happened on their team and he was feeling guilty? Something unpleasant must have definitely happened.

“Makoto?” she called for him, but no response. “You’re leaving me really worried. Tell me what happened. I want to help you.”

“It’s not really something to be worried. I’m just trying to recompose myself, that’s all.”

Recompose? “What do you mean it’s not something to be worried? Tell me what’s wrong, Makoto!” (Name) tried to look at his face but he didn’t move. “Wait, don’t tell me you were crying?”

“I wasn’t!” When she was about to cry with him (because that was the effect sadness had on her), he finally looked at her, but didn’t let her go. And her hands were still on his back. “I…”

“Makoto, I know you’re sad. I can tell just by looking at you. I can even feel it; my senses are tingling!” She said and he giggled a little. “What’s wrong? You know I hate to see you like that.” She sincerely said and he smiled.

“Sorry, I know how much you hate sadness…” He said and smiled sheepishly. “But don’t worry, I’m fine.”

“That’s what everyone says, but in the end they’re slowly breaking inside.” (Name) said with brows furrowed.

“You might be right there…”

“And I’m also right that you are indeed sad, am I?”

He didn’t answer. Makoto let her go and looked away. It was curious because, as soon as he separated from her, the cold came again.

“It’s nothing serious, really… It’s just…” He trailed off again, probably searching for words to explain himself. (Name) gave him time. “It’s my last year here.” He muttered.

(Name) didn’t know, but the ground seemed to suddenly slip away from her feet. Yes, it was true. Makoto was on his last year as an high school student. She would stay in Iwatobi one more year. Makoto would travel to another town to attend university. They would walk separate ways. (Name) could finally understand his sadness. It hurt. Thinking about him away from her, without being able to be with him every day. Without having him to help her in everything every day. It really hurt.

However, (Name) tried to cheer him up. “And? It’s not like we’re never going to see each other again, right? Unless you’re planning to abandon us; how dare you!” she teased him and she was finally able to see him smiling. Even though it was a smile deprived of happiness, he still smiled. Knowing him, probably to leave her less worried. “Come on, don’t be like that. We still have tons of time! And you still have to bear with me for some more time; I’m not even sorry!” She said and laughed, making him laugh with her. Something that satisfied her.

“I don’t mind at all.” Makoto said and shortened the distance between them. “You’re… really special to me. And you’ve been a great friend since we met.” (Name) didn’t know why, but her heart skipped a beat at his honest words. The way he said it… His voice was so gentle and his eyes looked so dazzling and sincere. She couldn’t see sadness reflected on them anymore. There was something else; something much more pleasant. It filled her heart with warm feelings. “(Name).” Makoto reached out and caressed her cheeks, making her eyes widen in surprise. “I don’t want to lose you. I don’t want to see you once in a while. I don’t want to be away from you less than this.”

(Name) started panicking. What was he saying?! Why was his speech sounding like a… love confession?! She had the urge to remove his hands from her cheeks and run away to reorganize her brain. It was a mess! Makoto was saying something strange - something he wouldn’t usually say to her - and she was actually scared. He was extremely kind, that was a fact and no arguments against it were valid, but she was terrified. And also a little confused. Was he saying that because they were friends and he didn’t want to lose contact with her? Or it was really…

(Name) was shaking. “Wh-What are you… saying?” Her voice missed a note and she sounded extremely shocked.

“I’m saying I like you. Not as a friend, but more than that.” And he said it so calmly and passionately that… (Name) almost collapsed. So it really was what she feared. Literally. Even though she knew her reaction was too much, she couldn’t believe someone had actually fallen in love with her.

“Makoto, are you sure? I… I don’t know what to say, I wasn’t expecting this…” Oh no, saying it like that just sounded like a rejection! He withdrew his hands and smiled at her. “I’m sorry…”

“It’s okay, it’s not like I was expecting you to return my feelings.” He said and stepped back. “Thanks for hearing me, anyway.”

(Name)’s heart squeezed in pain for seeing him disappointed with her and she felt completely lost. He was turning his back ready to leave when she called for him. He stopped and looked at her, his serious gaze piercing her.

“You’re… You’re really special for me too and I don’t want to lose you no matter what… But this was totally unexpected… I…” Gosh, she was feeling like shit now. There was no way she could erase that sad look from his eyes now that the culprit was her. (Name) wanted to make up for him somehow, but what should she do?

“I’ll wait.” He muttered, the moonbeam shinning on his eyes. (Name) looked up at him as she noticed he was getting closer. “I’ll wait as long as necessary.” He leaned down and she gulped. This time, he didn’t lay his forehead on hers, as he did before. This time, she felt it. The softness and warmth of his lips. He kissed her softly, leaving her there, completely paralyzed. “I’ll wait.” He muttered again, his eyes piercing her soul, and then he extended one hand to her, which she took automatically.

They walked back in silence to their tents side by side. She couldn’t forget the kiss he gave her, much less his words before that. Every time she remembered his lips on hers her heart squeezed and she couldn’t stop the blushing from emerging on her cheeks. Gazing up at Makoto, she noticed that he was avoiding looking at her too, which made the situation much more embarrassing than what it seemed. But one thing she promised to herself: she would think about his feelings and give him an answer. As she said to him earlier, he was indeed special for her, and he didn’t deserve a rejection. But she was afraid of the outcome. What if they didn’t work out together? Then again, she was thinking too ahead of their relationship. (Name) decided to keep those thoughts away.

As they arrived at their tents, they gazed at one another in the eyes. They didn’t say a word, only looking at each other in the eyes. This is romantic, she admitted to herself. (Name) smiled awkwardly and brushed her hair away.

“Well… Go-good night…” She said and started to step away from him. Makoto reached a hand towards her but soon pulled away.

“Good night. Sweet dreams.” He said sweetly and then opened the zip of his tent.

“Sweet dreams for you too…” She said in a maze and started to carefully open the zip of her tent.

Peeking inside, she saw that Gou was still sleeping. (Name) sighed in relief. She entered and closed the zip again. Lying down on her improved bed, she stared at the ceiling. Her heart started to beat fast again and she remembered the moment they shared before. Feeling her cheeks burning again, she covered her entire self with her sheets.

She could only see his face every time she closed her eyes to sleep. His gaze at her. His voice. His kiss.

Great, how am I supposed to sleep now?!
HELLO HELLO! So yay here I am with my first one-shot. 
Gawd I am so sorry if Makoto looks a bit OOC, it's just that it was hard to grasp his personality - he's this sweetheart and cute character and it's hard to keep him like that. BUT! ... oh god I am melting with his speech. Honestly! I was writing this and melt in feels at the same time because I could really imagine him saying that and... well, my mom just told me to stfu because I was making a stupid face. But at least that part ended up as I first planned. Yay. And the song "Words That Changed My Life" from the Free! soundtrack helped a lot too. Such good soundtrack. 
And well, Reader-chan was an actual lucky girl because received a kiss. It wasn't planned but I had to. Just had to. Cries.

Well, hope you all liked. I'll do better next time if this is real shit. 
Makoto Tachibana (c) Kyoto Animation
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HeartStar2002 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AHWJRKD. Artimist - Blush / Embarrassed / Shy / Stuttering 
tsukinekko Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015
graceleu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So cute! I love him! :)
MissParkSungMi Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
0///0 he reminds me of Spain so much! >w< Some brown haired and green eyed anime guys are adorable and kind
briannamichaelis Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Hehehehehehe. The endings would have been different for me. I would have laid down. Then screamed so loud I woke up everybody. Then I would have started giggling super loud and Gou would freak out because she wouldn't know what's wrong with me. 

I would jump in the air mattress and then run out of the tent. I would jump into the boys tent and jump on them. Then run back outside, scream like a banshee, waving my arms in the air. i would end up tripping on a piece of sand and fall into the ocean. I would have sunk to the bottom. Have some one save me, then laugh my ass off once I got out of the water. 
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... That would be just EPIC ahahah
But yeah, I'm sure I would also do something of the sort.
Thanks for the comment c;
Happy New Year!! 
briannamichaelis Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student General Artist
Youre welcome. Happy New Year to you too
OkumuraSoyode-desu Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
WHAT'S THAT, HUH?! T-T it's so fuckin' beautiful..... y u no writing a second part?! TT_TT so wonderful... *cries*
bluemegane Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gomen ^^' I've been trying to but I have no idea what to write..... 
Bunch of thankies! c;
LeCuddlyPanda Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do I have permission to cry over how perfect this is?
bluemegane Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
/pats your head/
You have. And I even give you tissues. And you can cry on my shoulder too. ;u;
LeCuddlyPanda Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
-Huggles you and cries tears of joy-

It's just so amazinggggg roar scream Cry forever HNNNGGGG 
bluemegane Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww you flatter me (つᴗ⊂) I'm really happy you think so! ^^ 
TimidlittleSketch Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist
OH MAH GEEERRRSSHHH!!! I still have butterflies in my stomach O////O this story is just so adorable Heart :love: 
FrozenMLPfan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Artist
bluemegane Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
FrozenMLPfan Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
I'm not awesome
FrozenMLPfan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Artist
This is sooo good! :O I hope there's a sequel or something!
bluemegane Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm planning to write one ^^ soon I'll have it ready!
thank you! 
animegirl007 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
Are you kidding me?! :jawdrop:....I would have said YES!!!!!Pucca crazy dance 
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me too teehee 
AisuFire Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is screaming for a part 2 you know :o
I wonder what wil happen =3
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah and well... I'm still working on it. It's going to take a while since I'm planning to finish other stories first. ^^ 
Thank you! 
AisuFire Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hehe thats ok xD Take all the time you need ^-^
Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gah! I love this! Will there be more?
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm still working on it, i'm just not sure when will I post it ^^' 
Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay ^-^
LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist
Where's the sequel? No, seriously. Where is it?
bluemegane Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
... Nowhere... yet.... (laughs nervously) 
Okay, I think I'm definitely going to write a sequel. 
OneWingedNekoCas Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*internally crying for I have felt this way before* why can't there be guys like Makoto!? It's so well written with so many feelz!!!
bluemegane Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Cries with you, I know~ ;u; I want one Makoto for me like this too~
Thank ;u;
OneWingedNekoCas Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*sniffle* oh Makoto T_T
You're very welcome ;~;
ImAwesomeJDC Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*dies* oh dear gosh! I love it suuu much! And for me Makoto here isn't OOC! But will there be a part two? BECAUSE THIS STORY IZ PURFECTTT!!!!!!! I <3 it!
bluemegane Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, I wasn't planning on writing a second part, but now I wonder if I should? Maybe I'll give it a chance. c;
And thank you! I'm really happy you liked this thing and you didn't find our precious Makoto OOC ;u;
ImAwesomeJDC Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! I hope you do write a second part but it's okay if you don't I'm not forcing or anything, anyways i loved the story and NP it was my pleasure! :iconhugplz:
Menco2807 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<font><font>Omf!!! I love it! I Love It!!! >//w//< dbigwpe *fangirling* Good Jod! </font></font>
TheSkandranon Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ack!!! I totally say yes Makoto!!!!! lol
Nat-Contreras1999 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! >///< It's so bubbly and fluffy!!!!! Blush  I love it!!! XD Omg so cute 
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youuu I'm so glad you like it omg ;u;
BloodyRabbit-tan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omfg...i'm fangirling like crazy over here.....someone... help... #squealed #fainted
bluemegane Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
[sends Makoto to help you] I hope the help arrived at time (*❦ω❦)
Thank you for the comment! c:
mainanase Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
SO GOOD OMG BEST MAKOTO EVER Llama Emoji 02 (Blush) [V1] 
ThePinkBowAndBlueHat Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Omh, wow. This was actuallt really awesome and so damn sweet.
Just awww. ;_; I feel like fangirling so hard.
bluemegane Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it *A*
ReynWalker Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I love this so much. ;; w ;;
bluemegane Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

I'm glad you like it *A*
ReynWalker Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
I do, it's so... ヽ(´□`。)ノ
SkeletonDolly Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hello! I tell you something? I loved this story!
When Makoto said it was his last year, I felt I was in tears from the eyes haha, put me sentimental.
But I loved the outcome of the story x33
I hope that (Name)-chan is sincere with Mako-chan in the distant future, begin to feel stuff (? Haha
Congratulations! Keep it up (:

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